Well, after that doozy of an elimination, it’s back to the grind. Just one more of you won’t make the merge.
We obsessed over this week’s challenge, rotating ideas in and out, until finally I landed on this one. It’s called Meeting of the Mimes mostly because I love the word “mimes.”
Your task is to write a scene of 200-500 words with two characters. Something major is happening here; a change-of-life, a conflict, a big event. By the end of the piece, one of the two characters will be in a much better position than he or she was at the beginning, and the other will be in a much worse position (on whatever scale you like). Oh, and one other thing: neither of them will do any talking.
The lack of dialogue can be the result of anything you want, other than the characters being deaf or mute. The cleverer the reason for the silence, the better. Additionally, just to be clear, you can’t mention in the prose that the characters are speaking, either. The entire scene will take place with no words between them.
Just so it doesn’t get lost, let me reiterate the bit about one’s life/situation is much better at the end of the scene and the other’s is much worse (whether these characters are allies or adversaries). I’m very interested in that bit. (Beau’s edit: and that part was my idea).
Cheers, Survivors. I’m excited for this one (though, admittedly, a little saddened that I won’t get to see one from Andrew).
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August 30, 2010 at 3:39 pm
greekhouse
Are there allowed to be other people in the scene? Can the other people speak?
August 30, 2010 at 3:45 pm
spookymilk
As long as the main action stays on our two speechless heroes, sure.
August 30, 2010 at 3:53 pm
daneekasghost
I predict good things for our team. Since ‘voiceless’ is right in the name I think we have the clear advantage here.
August 30, 2010 at 4:18 pm
Rhubarb_Runner
One would thinks so, until one notices that “Winner” is right in the name, and suddenly one’s life/situation is much worse than the other’s.
August 30, 2010 at 4:59 pm
daneekasghost
Meh. “Winner” is bland and generic, giving no particular weight to this challenge. On the other hand, now last week’s loser group will have to try to overcome an obstacle specific to this week’s event.
August 30, 2010 at 5:00 pm
Rhubarb_Runner
In the spirit of this week’s challenge: 😛
August 30, 2010 at 4:14 pm
spookymilk
Oops, missed it. Netflix scale.
August 30, 2010 at 4:36 pm
Andrew
Holy crap, I’m almost glad I don’t have to do this
August 30, 2010 at 4:50 pm
eahnpurato
Ooh, I like this one. It has the feeling of a writing exercise I would have done for school.
August 30, 2010 at 6:53 pm
spookymilk
I’m not sure how to take that, so I hope you’re serious about liking it.
August 30, 2010 at 7:01 pm
eahnpurato
I am serious about liking it. It’s more in my wheelhouse than some of the other challenges.
August 30, 2010 at 8:33 pm
greekhouse
I’m on the other side of the fence. This one takes me a bit out of my comfort zone.
September 5, 2010 at 5:00 am
Spookymilk Survivor Challenge #14: Meeting of the Mimes | “é rayhahn, rayhahn”
[…] Spookymilk’s WGOM writer’s challenge. This week’s for you, Andrew. The challenge? Present a dialogue-free confrontation between two people, in 200-500 words, ending with one of the two in a much better position than at the start, and the […]
September 6, 2010 at 4:41 am
SBG
“Are the characters allowed to make any noises such as gasping or moaning?”
September 6, 2010 at 6:17 am
spookymilk
That would have been allowed, yes. I can’t remember if anyone utilized such sounds, though.