Well, there are 13 of you. That’s got to be lucky for somebody, right?
Anyway, this is a fairly short-form challenge that nonetheless causes some of the players to obsess (or maybe therefore causes the players to obsess).
It’s called Fortunately, Unfortunately and it’s been in every game since my co-judge Ryan pitched it to me for Survivor III. Each judge will give you a starting line, and for each you’ll write a string of anywhere between six and twelve lines, starting alternately with the words “fortunately” and “unfortunately.” It’s easier to just show you one of my favorites from a past game; here’s one from Andy Rustleund in Survivor V:
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I woke up, startled by the mooing in my bedroom.
Fortunately, I had my Moo-Detector 3000™ close at hand.
Unfortunately, it read “ZOMBIE”.
Fortunately, I had just a little Bovine Zombie Powder left in my pocket.
Unfortunately, my pants were across the room.
Fortunately, I’m my school’s record holder in the 100 meter dash.
Unfortunately, you need your brains to run.
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I considered posting several others, but in the past this game has gotten extremely vulgar and I was hoping to post one that didn’t go that way (don’t let this scare you from going that way if it works for you, though). Be aware that although they must rotate, you can start with either fortunately or unfortunately…whichever works better for your pieces.
Each judge will do a forced curve (6, 5, 4, 4, 3, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1) for his own starting line, giving each person two scores, and Immunity works as it always does (including the non-submitter caveat).
Your starting lines are:
Spookymilk:
I gave up smoking a few hours ago.
Beau:
Mary had a little lamb.
Alright, edited to add Beau’s starter sentence. Sorry about that, homeboys. Does anyone mind if I blame either tiredness or beer?
Cheers, dudes. This challenge usually comes out pretty great.
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August 3, 2010 at 3:40 am
daneekasghost
I hate cliffhangers like this, what’s Beau’s line?
August 3, 2010 at 3:45 am
Rhubarb_Runner
Unfortunately, it was dropped from the post.
August 3, 2010 at 3:47 am
daneekasghost
Fortunately, I can just make up my own starter sentence
August 5, 2010 at 7:31 pm
robzk
Unfortunately, Beau may not get the reference and give you a crappy score.
August 5, 2010 at 7:50 pm
Beau
Fortunately, I am confident all of you are learning your lesson
August 3, 2010 at 4:08 am
Andrew
Just to be clear, we’re gonna write two stories – one each for spooky’s opener and Beau’s opener (whatever that may be) – and then our scores will be averaged or added?
August 3, 2010 at 4:11 am
Beau
Yes
August 3, 2010 at 4:11 am
Beau
My opening line is “Mary had a little lamb.”
August 3, 2010 at 4:46 am
Rhubarb_Runner
Inquiry: do we have the option of opening with “unfortunately” first as well? Or does it have to be “fortunately”?
August 3, 2010 at 7:08 am
Beau
Copy/Paste
Be aware that although they must rotate, you can start with either fortunately or unfortunately…whichever works better for your pieces.
August 3, 2010 at 10:58 am
spookymilk
Oh, for dumb. I went in and added Beau’s starter and my pointless ending but apparently didn’t actually publish that version of the draft. Editing…
August 4, 2010 at 4:42 am
punmanbowler
This reminds me of one of the greatest moments in Simpson’s history:
Owner: Take this object, but beware it carries a terrible curse!
Homer: [worried] Ooooh, that’s bad.
Owner: But it comes with a free Frogurt!
Homer: [relieved] That’s good.
Owner: The Frogurt is also cursed.
Homer: [worried] That’s bad.
Owner: But you get your choice of topping!
Homer: [relieved] That’s good.
Owner: The toppings contains Potassium Benzoate.
Homer: [stares]
Owner: That’s bad.
August 4, 2010 at 6:01 am
spookymilk
Homer: …can I go now?
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It always makes me think of this scene too, which is odd since I probably saw this scene twenty times before someone else pitched the Fortunately, Unfortunately game to me.
August 5, 2010 at 2:45 pm
robzk
That episode was my first thought, too.
August 5, 2010 at 4:41 pm
tgetman
Will each judge be judging only his own first line or will each judge vote on both?
August 5, 2010 at 4:57 pm
Beau
our own
August 5, 2010 at 7:32 pm
robzk
I just got done with my entries and this is by far my favorite challenge to date.
August 8, 2010 at 8:44 am
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